Here is a simplified social network that I ended up doing by hand. I only accounted for dialogue that was in quotations, which I imagined to mean a 'louder' interaction, a limited technique but this method let me distill the narrative down to sound. This network is ruthless dismembering detail, intricacy and interconnected swampiness. I like this style because it displays the tragic missed connections more vividly, a father completely unconnected to his daughter, a mother speaks to her daughter but does not know it is her daughter. One mistake I made: I wrote the name Carl without looking closely- he is really 'The Occupant.' But maybe, it makes sense to split him into two people/ identities.
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